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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, December 4, 2019

♡New Activity♡

Hey Everyone!
Welcome back to my blog. 

This week is another special week because some of the year 7&8 are on Wellington camp. I am a year 8 but I didn't go to camp, so  I am here with the reliever teachers and the year 5&6, there are some year 7&8 too. So this week we have a different activity, which is called 'Work It'.

 Basically everyday we have to pick a career out of many of them and we have to answer questions, write what we know about it, what we want to know about it, we have to find how much money they get a year, a month, a week, a day and a hour. We also have to write what they do in typical day. That's what we do for Reading and  Maths.

 Now for writing we have to write a whole story what we do in the life of Flight Attendant or whichever career we chose. It's super fun, I have enjoyed doing it. 

Monday - Policewoman 
Tuesday - Nurse 
Wednesday - Flight Attendant 
Here is the example of what I am doing: 


Wednesday, October 23, 2019

♡Beautiful Flower♡

Hey Everyone 
Welcome back to my blog.

Yesterday after Tech we did a long write. We had to write about these amazing flowers. They look so cool on the pictures. So yesterday I wrote about it and it was actually very tricky, to be honest. This term our focus is to make our writing descriptive, so I tried to be very descriptive. But my writing isn't very descriptive, I think I could improve it a lot. 

If you have written about a picture before you know that it is very tricky to do, as you're not there in life, you're just doing it through a screen. I kind of like doing a recount of a holiday because I was living that moment. Today I had to finish the end of it. I don't think anyone finished it yesterday afternoon. 

Here is the picture: 

Here is the piece of writing: 

I’m strolling  along a side of a rocky lake. This lake isn't normal, it has a light blue water like the sky on a sunny day, the trees are a light green and they start to curve into the lake. I slowly walked over to the lake trying not to trip over, I deeply stare  into the clear water. I saw my reflection, I look like a spooky ghost. My arm shivers, I smile with happiest. One lonely silverfish came up to me and smiled it looked so depressed, it kind of looked like a mini me but a fish. 

 My reflection starts to fade away, I start to panic the tree start to shake like a crazy earthquake. My heart beats like a drum, my legs  sway side to side. I quickly run to the nearest exit of this lake. I ran into the trees while brown rusty sticks try to trip me up. Then one huge branch tripped me up and I rolled down the hill like a ball. I felt this sharp, painful thing in my arm. I rushly stand up and look.It was a rusty  knife, I started to cry like a baby, I pulled the knife out. 

However  I look up and I see this paddock filled with beautiful flowers, all of them are coloured coordinated like a rainbow has puked on them.  I saw these windmills go round and round like head if a clock. I smiled of cheerfulest while blood drips down as a tap.I walk over to a flower like a zombie.  I tug on the bottom of the flower and take a big breath in. Smells like sweet rosey perfume shattered onto a flower. 

I pull out a  petal and put pressure onto the weeping wound. My face cringed up with pain, if I were to scraped on finger on a chalkboard. My sore legs started to wobble like a jellyfish, my head started to spin as a wheel. My arms shook like an earthquake.  My legs gave way, I flopped back onto the charming flower, hitting the ground with a groan. CRACK, my neck made a horflicing sound. I closed my eyes as they shut with agony.