Embedded Clauses?

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This Blog post is about Embedded Clauses. Do you know what Embedded Clauses means? 

Currently in my writing  group im doing Commas which kind of relates to Embedded Clauses. 

I made a DLO explaining what I think Embedded Clauses means. It's actually pretty cool learning these things in my writing. 

What are you doing in your writing?

In my slide I made some examples of some writing so you guys can kind if picture what I'm meaning. Do you guys use some Commas in your writing? 

BYE! 

What if we all looked the same? - HOMEWORK

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This Blog post is about " What are the positive and negatives of looking the same" 

I made Biteable of my answer. What would you think if we all looked the same? I think people wouldn't like it if we looked the same Because some people want to stand out. 

What do you think a positive and negative is about looking the same? 

I wouldn't like it because I would want to be different not the same. Otherwise everything would be boring being the same, 

Bye!!

😄😄

chloe 11 on Biteable.

Using commas!!

Hey Everyone!! 

Today during writing time, I was learning how use Commas in the right way. 

1 activity was doing a 4 question quiz, and it wasn't that bad I only got 2 right. 

Using commas can change, the meaning of your sentence. 

Do you use commas everyday? 

We started off using comma games. 1 of them was like if you get the right sentence what has the right commas you can jump ahead but if you didnt you would die in some lava. 

Then we did quiz whats called " MEET THE COMMA" which wasn't bad either. 

We watched a video to about it. 

Here are some photos: 

We had to put some commas in but both of the sentences would have a different meaning.

Making a sentence with the pictures.  

Improving the sentence by putting some commas. 

What's the best age? Why?

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This blog post is my Homework. " What is the perfect age" I had to ask some family members what do they think the perfect age is? What do you think the perfect age is? 

Do you wish you could change your age if you could? 

I had to make a drawing of my family members being that age.. 

I know the drawing looks creepy but oh well. 

If you had a choice to stay one age what would it be and why?

Bye!! 

MATHS WORK ( BITEABLE) :)

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This Blog post is about my Maths work that I did this morning!! I didn't think it was tricky it was actually really fun!

I have used Biteable.com to make my Maths blog post more interesting. 

If you haven't used Biteable before go to ( Biteable.com) Its a very cool website to make everything interesting! 

I did my Maths work about Area and Perimeter. Do you know what Perimeter is?

Example: 

 basically its when you have shape and the shape always have measurement. 

normally we measure our shapes in Centre Metres or MM

if you have a square and its 20 cm on 1 side and 10 cm at the top. Could you guess what the other side and top be? 

Yes its 20 cm and 10 cm!! 

now add 20+20+10+10 = 60 

Heres my biteable
CYA!! 

chloe 8 on Biteable.

Adulting?? - Homework

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This is my Blog post Home work! 

Today I chose to do what would you do for a day if you were a adult? 

I had to ask adult family member what they would do and why? 

I gave 3 reasons what I would do! I would love to know what you bloggers would d0? 

Sometimes I wish I was adult. 

I hope you guys enjoy the slide 

CYA! 

My Writing Plan!! - I NEED FEEDBACK!! HELP

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Today we are starting to plan our new Narrative story and I need you guys to help me with it!! 
If you are seeing this the same day I posted please I need feedback to improve it :) 
Were doing it about this girl going into her addict   and seeing this mirror which looks weird? 

The photo will be down below that we were given to write about!! 
I have bullet point the planning so its a bit easier to understand for me. I know I haven't added any ispace into the plan but the story will be way more interesting.
So Ill be posting the finished Narrative :) 

Here is the photo:





Here is my Plan :)